make small revisions to my persuasive english paper

Make revisions to my initial Persuasive Paper per the instructor comments:

Comments:

Thank you for your submission. This is not exactly a controversial subject, so I think that is perhaps why a strong arguable stance isn’t really taken within your paper?

Your supports are organized overall though, and I did like the support that was included about the benefits of having current employees. There were a few areas within your paper that needed further clarity. I inserted a few notes!

Ms.O.